Egyptian of the Dark Cave
Once upon a time there was a
nine year-old Jack and Annie was a seven year-old. It all started in
this story when Jack opened a book and just pointed at the place that he
wanted to go to.
Then the tree house started to
spin and spin. Then it was absolutely still. Annie peeked out the
window. Annie gasped, "Holy."
Jack peeked out also.
"Where are we?" asked Jack. "Letís check the
book", Jack suggested. "Iím not sure", replied Annie.
"Oh, come one," pleaded Jack. "Letís just check the
book. I think we are in an Egyptian place, Annie.""Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!",
So they checked the book and
saw Egyptian people and Egyptian cats. They checked the map, too, and
they were right.
So they were minding their own
business when along came a mummy. Jack yelled, "Letís get out of
here. Sooner or later they had to find a way out. I myself thought they
would be scared of the mummy. All of a sudden they were not watching
where they were going. Annie fell down in a Egyptian hole. "Jack,
help me please! I think I just fell into an Egyptian hole!
"Stay there. Iíll try
to get a net or rope," said Jack. But before Jack could get a net,
it was too late. A black panther came out in the Egyptian of the dark
Jack screamed. "A black panther is near me. Iím coming Annie.
"Well get me out of here."
Jack grabbed on Annieís
yellow jacket. "You need to get me out of the cave, OK?" said
"Now that I have saved
you, donít you remember the old lady at sundown?"
"Jack, now is the time to
save the old lady. Besides, you said, OK OK OK OK OK OK."
"Come one Jack. Now that
I am saved, letís get out of here." Annie said. "What a
"Remember the old
lady," Annie said.
"Oh, yes. We have to save
her life or she will die. We wouldnít want her to die. We have to find
that old lady."
They finally reached the cave
and they found the ruby red crystal. Can you believe what they saw? They
saw the ruby red crystal. Then they took theruby red crystal out of the
cave. "Now, letís find that old lady," said Jack.Then they
found her. "Oh, thank you so much," said the old lady.
said Jack and Annie.Chapter Five
Then they finally reached it
home. "Hi, Mom. Hi, Dad," said Annie.
"You have another day
tomorrow," said Annieís mom. "Where is Jack?"
"I donít know,"
said Annie. Ding-dong.
"Hello," said Jack.
"Jack!" said Annie.
"Youíve got another day
tomorrow," said Jack and Annieís mom.